-Live footage of The Fiver
-What the requirements are for getting in
-What you get if your band is accepted
-How to apply
-It must look contemporary
-Appealing to the 14 – 17 age group
-Supply all the relevant information
-Good use of the bands, drops me straight into the evening
-Does not show entry requirements
-Mentions financial incentives but not the opportunities of working on large stage with sound and techs
- would be great to include this in the final cut
-Left me slightly confused
-Looks modern
-Great editing and speed
-Yes but does not include too much of the younger band(s)
-Unsure the ticker tape is clear enough, moves too quickly, unclear
Feedback from class mates
-text effect great Idea but think about using a diffrent font maybe
-Maybe more footage of what the bands throught of there experience
-Overall quite good and effective but needs a 'WOW' factor
After having received this feedback it is quite clear on what we need to do, we need to include more information about the actual fiver, all the financial information how you can get involved in the fiver and be apart of it, what happens when you are apart of it. We need to mention the fact that you get to work with professionals in the industry and you get to perform on a big stage in front of hundreds of people.
They said that it looks quite good and we are on the right track to creating a good promo, we just need to improve on these few things.
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